There are still a couple of spelling/punctuation issues on the front cover. The colour scheme combined with the font style make some of the coverlines hard to read. The coloured bar at the top still needs more blending in. I think this needs a little more drafting but you're nearly there.
even though i can see the cover lines better i dont really like the colour but everything else is really good
ReplyDeleteThere are still a couple of spelling/punctuation issues on the front cover. The colour scheme combined with the font style make some of the coverlines hard to read. The coloured bar at the top still needs more blending in. I think this needs a little more drafting but you're nearly there.
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